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Dark Poetry #4

Crimson Red

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-05-09 07:27 PM

Crimson Red

This arrow found was taken from the depths,
The depths of death and dying.
This arrow found was stained,
Blood stained crimson red.

These bullets lost were gone forever,
Gone until I found what the purpose was.
These bullets lost were colored,
Blood colored crimson red.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-09 07:59 PM

interestingly superb.. i like it

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-05-10 02:18 PM

Thanks Zach, this one was a particularly hard one to get out, hence the shortness of it.

*Julianna*

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-05-11 02:34 AM

this is really good I like it alot

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2008-05-19 08:59 PM

still like the way you write

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

shakalakaboomboom
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since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

5 posted 2008-05-19 09:38 PM

i love it!
pluse i love the color red ^^

~Savana

wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10

Posts 93

6 posted 2008-06-11 12:39 PM

nice write
ill be on the look more of your poems

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