Cut - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #4

Cut

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

0 posted 2008-05-06 03:11 PM

When I'm lost, scared, and confused. My soul gets lost and wondes around till its found. My thoughts are never were they should be. There alway confused and don't know what to do.
When the time comes that I need to feed my body, the food smells awful, and i can not eat it.
When bed time comes I cannot fall away from this world. Can't escape to a world that might bring me peace; if my dreams were to bring me peace. I may not always show this, but behided close doors no one knows me at all.
Cut me and I will bleed.
Hurt me and I will cry.

Is it to be true that you would hurt me

again.on.death.row
New Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 9
Canada

1 posted 2008-05-08 09:21 PM

heyy this is good. Great choice of words, I like the ending, great way to finish.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-05-09 02:56 PM

Yeah this is a good poem.. sad but good

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.