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angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-05-02 10:31 PM



my pain is black
my heart is hurt
but i refuse to suffer
i will move on
tell my day has come
when its time to say good bye
im spilling my heart
to whom who cares and will listen
now love now hold mw later
and let this life move on



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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-05-03 01:56 PM


Great wirte. though I think there's some spelling mistakes. But who am I to tell someone they spell a word wrong! lol I suck at spelling. Again, great wirte.

        {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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