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Dark Poetry #4

Big Ole Box

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2008-05-02 08:18 PM

Big Ole Box

Simulate the norm
Help the process
With your toe
Follow the line
Feel the walls
Of your big ole box

Nod your head
Never cast your eyes
Further then your reach
From your knees
Live a life
Amen

Pretend
Pretend
Pretend
Freedom

Yoin

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-05-02 09:06 PM

I have one question. Where do u get all ur fantastic ideas?! I absolutly love the way u word everything, i'm simply amazed by the way the words are confusing and yet make total sence. You are soon becoming one of my favorite poets on this site. Amazingly writen. You are going in my library.

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{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

2 posted 2008-05-03 10:08 PM

Thank you broken, glad you like it. Where do i get my ideas? from my past mostly, lessons learned...old loves....mistakes ive made...your usual poet fodder of life lol....thanks again

Yoin

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