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Dark Poetry #4

black tea

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-12-12 07:08 PM

I bought some grey paint at your new store,
you call it dreary. I call you cold.
you eyes are sending shivers up through my bones.
So I pressed the pause button and stained my burgendy tears a beautiful moth color.
That's what you wanted.
Quiet and dull, just like you.
Sit still, look pretty.
Music seethes in my lungs
acid on my throat
wash it down with black tea.
Hot and dark.
Like your eyes
Now your in my stomach
watching me.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-12-12 11:26 PM

You wrote a poem once called Canvas and I though it was completely awesome. I think you've done it again. I actually did make a print out of Canvas and I think I'm going to do the same with this. Nice work.

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Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

2 posted 2003-12-13 05:14 PM

Very amazing poem, I really enjoyed it.

Brigid WillowKeeper
Member

since 2003-08-24

Posts 88
OHIO IN USA

3 posted 2003-12-15 12:28 PM

Great work!!! This one lingers in your thoughts, that is excellent!

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

4 posted 2003-12-18 04:11 PM

Oh! I've missed reading your stuff. (my own fault - I haven't been here much lately). Anyway, I'm glad I found this poem. Loved it.

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