A Broken Heart . . . It Kills

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Dark Poetry #4

A Broken Heart . . . It Kills

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-04-28 05:02 PM

Beautiful black box, engraved with such sweet sorrow
Clutched tightly in your hands, you refuse to let it fall
Deep inside, are the darkest ebony secrets
Ever to grace these mortal eyes

This lovely coffin, with decals so fine
A perfect tomb of pain, shelter for the unloved
Cobwebs between the corners, never been touched
Is this what graces mortal eyes?

Listen close to the whispering wind, can you hear her lovely laugh?
Once a princess, now a frozen corpse
There’s only one reason for her mistake:
A broken heart . . . it kills

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-04-28 05:33 PM

"A broken heart left un-mend.
Let it bleed its sorrow.
Left in the cold, left to its final end."

wow i just thought of that. It could be a poem right? lol anyway. great write. Alot of emotions in it

~Zach~

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-07-10 04:52 PM

Wow, this is amazing. I don't know how I missed it but I'm glad I read it now. I'm left half speechless. Grea write.
{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2008-07-10 10:41 PM

It is unfortunate that your speaker had to go to such great lengths to alleviate passion.

Moonkist
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since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-07-10 11:56 PM

Very vivid imagery... beautifully and sadly written.

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