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Dark Poetry #4

fight

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-04-28 12:37 PM

this is for the ones who have been raped

the ones that burn inside with hate

i cant promise you everything will be alright

but you dont have to put up with the fight

this is for the ones that have been physically
abused

the ones that feel they have always been used

i know you cry urself to sleep at night

but you dont have to put up with the fight

not everything will be okay

but you will be free someday

you will be away with noone in sight

becuase you did fight the fight

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

1 posted 2008-04-28 06:33 PM

This was very good lots of emotion. Loved it.

*-crazycece-*

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

2 posted 2008-04-28 06:37 PM

very good

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

3 posted 2008-04-28 09:48 PM

angelfacegurl,

Tough! Nice job.

V/r,

Virtual Abyss

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2008-04-28 09:51 PM

good emotion.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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