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Dark Poetry #4

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angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-04-23 01:01 PM

she used to be depressed by the way she dressednow shes sad becuase shes never had a dad
shes has a boyfriend who is never there
shes got people who always stop and stare
shes uses black to hide the stains
shes hides why her heart drains
but oneday she will go to far
no time left to show the scar
but she will leave this world with no fear
and no more blood left to smear

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

1 posted 2008-04-23 02:46 PM

I really understood this, I also feel it as will. Very good write.

*-crazycece-*

Desirer4New
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

2 posted 2008-04-24 09:18 PM

sad but for some reason it made me smile, i guess because i understood it...nice job

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

3 posted 2008-04-28 09:47 PM

i love the poem!! my favorite line is "shes got people who always stop and stare"

midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

Virtual Abyss
Member

since 2008-04-09

Posts 52
East Coast - USA

4 posted 2008-04-28 09:54 PM

angelfacegurl,

Yearning... my heart aches!

V/r,

Virtual Abyss

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-04-29 08:30 AM

Wow very touching and sad. I know how you feel like. hope things go well.

~Zach~

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2008-04-30 08:59 PM

wow...it's almost my own personal life deffinition. Fantastic job, i think this is going in my library...

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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