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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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0 posted 2008-04-23 09:06 AM


No matter what happens I'll always love you

Theres going to be so many things that they'll say

and you still don't believe that I've changed

but I have in so many ways

except for you my feelings always been the same

save me, save me, take me away

your eyes, I try, you're always the same

please stay, please stay, right here with me

I don't know but you know, how you feel inside

and I'm always wondering why

does it have to be you that I love

what is it about you I can't get enough

just save me from this nightmare

show me you love me and that you care

why does it have to be you that I love

I try my hardest just not to think of you

but its been so hard with all the things I go through

but why does it have to be you that I love

I just want to know is it really you that I love

Kate

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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2008-04-23 09:07 AM


This poem is about someone and I really want to forget him but I'm still in love with him and I don't know what to do.

Kate

masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
2 posted 2008-04-23 02:57 PM


I tottaly know what you mean..I really want to forgive this guy for hurting me, but i still love him, but i know he wouldnt love me. Great write tho.

*-crazycece-*

Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
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3 posted 2008-04-24 09:14 PM


really nice...easy for people to relate too...good job
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
4 posted 2008-04-28 10:39 AM


Thank you I'm glad you guys can relate thats what I want to do with my poems and have people who enjoy them.

Kate

voice2bheard
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5 posted 2009-12-16 04:11 AM


WOW!! YEA CAN'T BELIEVE THIS ONE!!

Kate

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