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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
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KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-04-20 09:49 AM


Razormouth you cut me.
Lashing-out you touch me.
Thrash about in a wondrous sphere of impersonal friends.

Aren't you a godsend, the living end,
so full of direction you can't unbend.

Primal etchings engraved upon your heart,
speak of seductive scenery severed and apart.
Our worlds collide, the friction draws a spark.
You ride it high, then tumble in its ark.

Panic knob I've pressed you,
emotionally undressed you,
and for a moment watched you glowing full with pride.

Yet now you hide, your hope denied,
so full of conclusions you can't decide.

Primal etchings engraved upon your heart,
reflect the distance sought as you embark.
Our worlds collide, the friction draws a spark.
You ride it high, then tumble in its ark.

Rick Delmonico

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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-04-21 05:10 PM


nice write!!!
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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