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Dark Poetry #4

Im Backwards

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

0 posted 2008-04-02 10:24 PM

Im Backwards

I can't see
where do i belong
    im backwards

the clock waves it's hands
who can i be every day for hours
    im backwards

things sound funny
i talk about nothing
i cant turn around
    im backwards

Yoin

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-04-04 12:51 PM

nice write

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

2 posted 2008-04-06 11:35 PM

I love this... makes me feel lost and alone and different in the mind.

Tammy<333

Twilight Warrior
Member

since 2007-02-22

Posts 106
The World That Never Was

3 posted 2008-04-07 09:31 PM

You and me both brotha, you and me both. 9/10

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

4 posted 2008-04-07 10:23 PM

I like this one, made me lost in my thoughts...

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

5 posted 2008-04-11 05:06 AM

Thanks all for your thoughts. Life does become very hard when we find our compass just doesn't work anymore. A hard look in the mirror helps to set the needle straight again. Thanks

Yoin

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