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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Her tears of blood Water the ground from which she stands Coming like a flood Her emotions sift and shake like sand Flowers slowly bloom in her field of hope Raining tears begain a new era in her story This pain she feels is beginning to cope Slowly drifting from reality and all its glory Slowly she drifts away from it all like floating in the tides she's quietly fading no matter how many times you call. the gap betwen u two is so wide. Slowly she fades away from you Nothing you can do.. Reach for her hand, you do Lifelessly she fades so do you. XxZachXx |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
nice, i like it I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
good job JJ |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Very real, I can sorta relate, if that works. *Julianna* |
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PoetsPlay Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 56California |
That's really neat, I like it! Alexandra |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Zach... the last line.... intense and beautiful... I hate it but that is a good thing. You've brought my emotion into it. I don't hate your words.... I hate the feeling that they evoke. Well done, doll! ~~~Amanda~~~ Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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