Dark Poetry #4 |
Its Here #2 |
the amazing emo kid New Member
since 2007-05-23
Posts 6South Carolina |
It's Here #2 Then something in you changes That feeling.... That horrible feeling that spreads.... spreads like a cancer Slowly leaves You start to gain feeling again It warms you and kills all pain You feel calm, peaceful, aware alive...... You start to ask yourself What saved you from your prison What carried you from that dark place That dark place in your mind You ask and think and then....... Then the answer is clear clearer then anything else in the world you know what saved you HOPE hope saved your mess of a life It gave you something to life for Something to follow something that needed you It gave you a second chance......... It gave you.......LIFE by; Andrew M. Osborne |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
hmm, i like it. Good job, I have a friend from South Carolina!! ...but anyway {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] {`~Emily~`} |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
I like this a lot. It's a very well written and well described poem. I think I'm going to like your work quite a bit. Welcome to PIP. Hope to see more from you. TJ No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I'll have to admitt this is pretty good if you ask me. i can't wait to see more of your work!! this poem is deffenently going in my library! and welcome to PIP!! Have a great day!! XxZachxX |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
i, too, liked your poem and "hope" to read more...believe there is an intriguing wavelength starting to pulsate...could be a heartbeat...where there is life there can be hope and where there is hope there will be life, renewed! |
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