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Dark Poetry #4

Chosen To End

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-03-15 10:47 PM

rejection, loneliness and dispair
the wounded emotions of a jaded heart
these contaminated bullets puncture
your once wholesome life
leaving you to die
slowly
severly
while you painfully wonder
how life would've been
without you

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-03-17 06:04 PM

Awe hun, we all think that some days.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

2 posted 2008-03-19 12:18 PM

liked it. good job

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

3 posted 2008-03-24 05:31 PM

Thanx for the comments.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

x-tears-x
Junior Member

since 2008-04-13

Posts 43
England

4 posted 2008-04-13 08:49 PM

thats really good. really effective. hope your ok! x

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

5 posted 2008-04-13 08:54 PM

x-tears-x, It's sad to say, but I don't really think I'll ever be okay. Thanx for the comment though.

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

6 posted 2008-04-15 09:19 PM

great poem shattered-smiles.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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