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hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-03-14 04:50 PM

i would scream
at you
if words
could express
this pain

i would yell
at you
but i would
just start crying
again

and the truth is
no words can
express my pain

becasue they could
never be
as harsh
and hateful
as i feel
towards you

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (03-14-2008 05:38 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-14 07:09 PM

whoa i know that feeling. great poem!

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-03-16 06:28 PM

i know the feeling as well. boy do i hate it. yet it's comforting in a kind of way. weird.

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-03-17 07:07 PM

NICE WRITE

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-04-04 01:04 AM

thanx

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-04-10 08:29 PM

the feeling sucks

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

6 posted 2008-04-13 12:26 PM

how is it comforting?

JJ

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

7 posted 2008-04-19 02:17 PM

i don't really know. it just comforts me a little.

PAiGEY
Junior Member

since 2008-05-01

Posts 13
victooriaa

8 posted 2008-05-02 02:21 AM

how is that comforting?
that was disturbing :P
quite a good write though.
Keep it up (Y)

x.paaaige.x

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

9 posted 2008-05-25 05:44 PM

lol thanks

JJ

wolfy09
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 93

10 posted 2008-06-10 02:21 PM

nice write

Desirer4New
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

11 posted 2008-06-12 12:20 PM

nice write i enjoyed it...good job

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