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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
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at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-03-14 04:50 PM


i would scream
at you
if words
could express
this pain

i would yell
at you
but i would
just start crying
again

and the truth is
no words can
express my pain

becasue they could
never be
as harsh
and hateful
as i feel
towards you

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (03-14-2008 05:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-03-14 07:09 PM


whoa i know that feeling. great poem!

~Zach~  

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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-03-16 06:28 PM


i know the feeling as well. boy do i hate it. yet it's comforting in a kind of way. weird.
fromme2U
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3 posted 2008-03-17 07:07 PM


NICE WRITE
hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
4 posted 2008-04-04 01:04 AM


thanx

JJ

hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
5 posted 2008-04-10 08:29 PM


the feeling sucks

JJ

hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
6 posted 2008-04-13 12:26 PM


how is it comforting?

JJ

midnightdreamer
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Roy,ut
7 posted 2008-04-19 02:17 PM


i don't really know. it just comforts me a little.
PAiGEY
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victooriaa
8 posted 2008-05-02 02:21 AM


how is that comforting?
that was disturbing :P
quite a good write though.
Keep it up (Y)


x.paaaige.x

hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
9 posted 2008-05-25 05:44 PM


lol thanks

JJ

wolfy09
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10 posted 2008-06-10 02:21 PM


nice write
Desirer4New
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basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art
11 posted 2008-06-12 12:20 PM


nice write i enjoyed it...good job
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