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When does it hurt?
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
When does it hurt, when theres a voice inside telling you to go How do you feel, when theres so many emotions you just want to show When does it hurt, just take your time and you'll be alright hold my hand and hold on tight When does it hurt, when you love someone but they don't feel the same Why do we always have who we don't want and always want who we don't have When does it hurt, and we have no reson why it makes no sense that we just breakdown and cry When does it hurt, how do you feel a sense when something is wrong, when its real When does it hurt, when you know you found true love and you always think to yourself will I be enough When does it hurt, when you've hurt others for so long then they leave you and become strong When does it hurt, how do you feel You can take my time, I'll make you a deal If you can tell me when it hurts I'll keep your secret locked close inside of me Let all of your anger out and bleed When does it hurt Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
This poem is just something that I wrote about my true love and if you're one of my fans of my work then you know who he is... Kate |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
i know how you feel. great write I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
This was really touching. enjoyed a lot |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you guys!! Glad you loved it!! Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
WOW NOT SURE IF I REMEMBER WRITING THIS? Kate |
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