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0 posted 2008-03-05 07:31 PM


Okay one night I woke up from this nightmare which is this poem. My nightmare was more vivid than i said in my poem but you can imagion what really happened.....

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Nightmare of the Beast

The beast with eyes of red
It lurks in you dreams while you sleep in your bed

Its nostrols flare while it smells your scent
Its blood soaked smile is crooked and bent

Eyes of fire with dried up tears
It tears at your fleash. Your darkest fear.

You try to run and scream with all your might
But it jumps in the air as if in flight

You run for the woods in fear to hide
But you well know it lurks down inside

The claws shine like blades in pale moonlight
You eyes widen in great fright

But it turns on your family and friends in a burning rage.
Like fire does when buring a page.

There screams and wail
It turns your skin pale

You runaway with eyes of tears
Its finish with them..now its your turn. you run in fear.

It corners you up against a tree. You can't run or flee.
But the tears make it harder to see.

With a final blow it finishs the act.
"Gasp!" You say. Now awake from you dream you know the fact.

That the monster was real. You look at the scar
In the distance ,you hear the howl, its way afar

The eyes of red glow in the night.
Grinding the blood-soaked teeth thinking of his next plight....

(Hope you sleep well tonight muhahaha ) lol

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i think i messed up in my ryhmeing scheme somewhere. Hope you like!!!

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1 posted 2008-03-05 07:40 PM


Not bad not bad.  Sounds like a scary nightmare.  I hope you had a better sleep after.  Great poem though.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

The_Nameless_One
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2 posted 2008-03-05 11:46 PM


you should have proof read it first for grammatical errors then it would be ok

firestorm
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since 2008-02-26
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3 posted 2008-03-06 12:07 PM


very well written considering how bad the nightmare seemed-hope it helped to get it on paper or screen to ease the demon
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