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Nightmare of the Beast
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Nightmare of the Beast |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Okay one night I woke up from this nightmare which is this poem. My nightmare was more vivid than i said in my poem but you can imagion what really happened..... ---------------------------------------------------- Nightmare of the Beast The beast with eyes of red It lurks in you dreams while you sleep in your bed Its nostrols flare while it smells your scent Its blood soaked smile is crooked and bent Eyes of fire with dried up tears It tears at your fleash. Your darkest fear. You try to run and scream with all your might But it jumps in the air as if in flight You run for the woods in fear to hide But you well know it lurks down inside The claws shine like blades in pale moonlight You eyes widen in great fright But it turns on your family and friends in a burning rage. Like fire does when buring a page. There screams and wail It turns your skin pale You runaway with eyes of tears Its finish with them..now its your turn. you run in fear. It corners you up against a tree. You can't run or flee. But the tears make it harder to see. With a final blow it finishs the act. "Gasp!" You say. Now awake from you dream you know the fact. That the monster was real. You look at the scar In the distance ,you hear the howl, its way afar The eyes of red glow in the night. Grinding the blood-soaked teeth thinking of his next plight.... (Hope you sleep well tonight muhahaha  ) lol ------------------------------------------------ i think i messed up in my ryhmeing scheme somewhere. Hope you like!!! |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Not bad not bad. Sounds like a scary nightmare. I hope you had a better sleep after. Great poem though. TJ No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
you should have proof read it first for grammatical errors then it would be ok |
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firestorm Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 109 |
very well written considering how bad the nightmare seemed-hope it helped to get it on paper or screen to ease the demon |
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