Dark Poetry #4 |
Narcissism |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Confused, I have to clear my enemy This obstacle within myself To a world of comfortable and normal human beings A world I have felt distant and lost from in a puddle of my own guilt Sometimes I feel cursed and just want out The light of excitment, my melodic soul Someone hear me and listen to what I say Guilty cloud and absent stare To a belonging someone to A nervousness of experience and containment Let me live Voodoo woman with immature rage and much too precious attitude Let me live A soul of my own Weight of depression and saddness Lack of hope grinding my direction to a stand still and stop I can see what she has done and what to do but where to go I'm lost again in this plastic coated world that seems to melt under pressure And direction can come only from myself if it doesn't rot away into the nothingness of oblivion and eternal sleep a freedom of myself The rest of the world is so beautiful, even if just a peek. Closed will remain closed until opened. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
this is deep, lots to think about there, "I'm lost again in this plastic coated world that seems to melt under pressure" ...that's an interesting line to...neva woulda thought o dat. =) any who...ttttttttyyyylllllaterzzzz - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig> these are the most insightful words I have read in a long time: Let me live A soul of my own YES *smile* and please do |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
stand still and stop maybe one or the other. you talk about wanting a soul of your own and then that you want freedom from yourself in sleep. you sound confused. I know how this is, this is a perfect poem for my day. the first stanza is amazing, it is how I feel A LOT. beautiful words, Craig. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx for the responses. GIS Closed will remain closed until opened. [I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain [This message has been edited by green_itchy_stuff (12-10-2003 09:32 AM).] |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
greeny, first read i liked this but gotta come back to it so ill give you a better response in a few... "So what befalls the flawless? |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
i'm listening. this is a reall y intense and powerful write, adding this for sure. now that i ahve gone back and read it more in depth this seems like a call out to anyone out there, i very much enjoyed reading this "So what befalls the flawless? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I guess you heard me then didn't you. Thanx. GIs Closed will remain closed until opened. |
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