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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Okay this is two different poems i wrote during a math quiz cuz i was bored of doing math lol. Anyway these two poems are partially about the same subject. one poem might have another meaning in it idk. well here it is.. -------------------------------------------------- Twilight fading Tides all wading Never sleeping Never awake Time stands still, Tranquility. Sinking in the ground Wondering if I'll be found In this place where i call home. Never seeing what is light But always see my shadow, Daybreak ------------------------------------------ Stuck in the shawdows of my light Barely breathing, barely have any sight Leaves falling to the ground. Love is lost, was it ever found? Shades of gray fill my life Always seeing all the strife Minute hand stop, clock froze How will I: escape? Only God knows.... XxZachxX |
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Good Man Gone Better New Member
since 2008-04-13
Posts 3 |
Great poem. I almost cried.... |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
loved both!! the second one relates to me more i think. great poems!! midnightdreamer black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show. |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
These are really good Zach...they almost made me shed a few tears. Good work, keep on writing. TJ So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful... |
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tattycoram New Member
since 2008-04-28
Posts 3 |
Very powerful! |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
thanks everyone for commenting my poems! really appreteate it! ~Zach~ |
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