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River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

0 posted 2003-12-08 09:41 PM

Prison escape
longing at the moonlight
shining in the outside night
for my freedom I'll fight
fight to the end
fight to the death
if only just to feel the grass
again.

This prison is dark
it has grown into me
now i must flee
now i must be free
of the stench that posseses me
of the cold that invited itself inside
i try, i cannot hide.
i run, i cannot escape
yet.

Sing in these endless circles
hoping to feel air
breath these forever cycles
hoping to know life
break free of these lies
forever.

Remember grace
remember peace
knowledge of hope
looking back
seeing fear
looking ahead
seeing light ever near
seeing light ever near.

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-12-08 11:06 PM

I had a feeling I would be able to relate to this right when I saw it, and I had an idea what it would be abour. Nicely done. Very enjoyable especially since I can relate.

GIS

Closed will remain closed until opened.

[I try hard to have a father, but instead I had a dad...]- Kurt Cobain

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

2 posted 2003-12-08 11:11 PM

congrads on your escape. write me back and tell me more when you get the chance. (please?) and thanx.

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-12-09 09:38 AM

Hey Bonnie:

YESSSS oh to feel the grass
always walk barefoot please
*smile*

*tossing you the key*

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

4 posted 2003-12-09 04:52 PM

*catches the key* thanx, i always walk barefoot in the summertime =).

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2003-12-10 06:19 PM

"This prison is dark
it has grown into me
now i must flee
now i must be free
of the stench that posseses me
of the cold that invited itself inside
i try, i cannot hide.
i run, i cannot escape
yet."

yet...

nicely done

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

6 posted 2003-12-10 09:53 PM

thank ya eor =) nice hearin from you again.

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

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