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Dark Poetry #4

Falling tears

jossal
Junior Member

since 2007-09-15

Posts 23

0 posted 2008-01-09 03:25 PM

The drop of water slides down my face,
My hot, salty miserable tears,
It's just like one big chase,
To find my crystal ball, my seers.

Haven't you felt, the tears of blood,
The drip, dip, drip again,
The pair of scales, evil and good,
You are comfortable, I'm in pain.

My shaking hands hold a knife,
Time to bid goodbye,
To my pitiful excuse of a life,
Embrace death, my time to die.

I'm not sure why I do this,
The reason Satan gave,
Yet even in death i have clenched fists,
The leader ofdeath's parade.

Darkness is only the lack of light...

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2008-01-11 01:33 PM

I loved this poem and could really feel what you're going through

Kate

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

2 posted 2008-01-16 07:48 PM

I can see how you feel through this poem, good job! You may want to go over your grammar and spelling.

Alexandra

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