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Dark Poetry #4

streTCHing

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

0 posted 2007-12-22 08:08 AM

I feel as if
I'm being stretched thin
Far past any other human.

My road seems to go on,
Farther and farther
Don't know what I'm doing,
Don't know what I'm thinking...
Just faithfully following this road.

Going through this life,
Passing colors and people alike,
Can't tell the difference,
Stretched too thin to try.

In a room,
Full of friends,
People I once knew.
They look right through me,
Like I'm not even there,
I am turning invisible from this pulling.

Things I'd decided I would see through,
Now seem insignificant,
Or they might be part of the problem.

Alexandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-12-22 04:06 PM

Alexandra~

I want to take a moment to commend you on your excellent spelling~
It is refreshing to read young poets who take the time to perfect their work~

I like this~
Merry Christmas~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

2 posted 2007-12-22 09:37 PM

Thank you! My eigth grade english teacher has taught us well...and I'm also a grammar freak. Can't stand misspellings and such.

Alexandra

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

3 posted 2007-12-23 12:03 PM

Wonderfully done! I really enjoyed it.

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