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My Disease
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My Disease |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
I've got this disease virulent spasms in my head They bring me down to my knees wishing I could be dead Chaotic thoughts confuse me rip me apart inside This is not the place to be makes me think of suicide I no longer want to be alive but I don't give up the fight These feelings I contrive have me heading for the light Taking one step forward I fall into a trap I've entered the mental ward and now I'm imprisoned by a strap |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
You know, I just finished reading a book, and the "bad guy" of the story was called the nameless one. I knew I had seen it before and I was browsing through here and I found you! Ta-da! Well- back to the matter at hand, your poem I don't really know how to comment on it. I know that you are talented, it shows, but I have nothing literate to give you. I'm sorry. -Kate
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
intriguing.I liked it |
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