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The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri

0 posted 2007-12-15 04:33 PM



I've got this disease
virulent spasms in my head
They bring me down to my knees
wishing I could be dead
Chaotic thoughts confuse me
rip me apart inside
This is not the place to be
makes me think of suicide
I no longer want to be alive
but I don't give up the fight
These feelings I contrive
have me heading for the light
Taking one step forward
I fall into a trap
I've entered the mental ward
and now I'm imprisoned by a strap

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2007-12-17 08:27 AM


You know, I just finished reading a book, and the "bad guy" of the story was called the nameless one. I knew I had seen it before and I was browsing through here and I found you! Ta-da! Well- back to the matter at hand, your poem I don't really know how to comment on it. I know that you are talented, it shows, but I have nothing literate to give you. I'm sorry.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

fromme2U
Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

2 posted 2007-12-18 06:30 PM


intriguing.I liked it
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