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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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another wasted breath, used to talk to you...is it really worth it?... tell me what i should do,tell me if i should cry,if i should bleed...would any of it make me feel better? anything is better than this feeling i feel like someone took my insides and tied them in a knot and threw them back inside of me,then took my heart ripped it open and filled it with broken peices of glass,tearing at my soul at every heart beat... every heart beat... |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Very painful poem, hard to read such pain. I live in Alberta too. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
as soon as i read it i felt that persons pain. i know how that feels as well. it hurt to read... i like how dark it was youre work never stops amazing me |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Chelsea? Good Lord this is awesome writing nice bleed |
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