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Christmas day |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
The fire sizzles and cracks sitting so warm on a dark cold night, when lives are torn but something happens on this special night something wonderful that makes it alright they laugh and they smile say "don't go, stay a while" but sooner or later they have to go home and when they did they would be alone so much for beingspecial they thought but what a tragedy would come, what it brought a family of four on their way home from a gathering talking and laughing, until someone started beeping it happend so quickly, it happend so fast the accident came in such a quick flash the glass that was shattered everywhere a little voice cries out, " Is anyone there?" the darkness and shadows someone left behind those people never knew that day was the last time that they would laugh, or smile, or even hold a hand someone took their life, and why, many didn't understand now along that road was a sign that would say a family of four, there lives were taken on Christmas day a few years have gone by, but many never passed the thought of those lives, taken, grasped its not just their lives whose been affected ones who loved them, when life was golden now in tears by the lives that were stolen no matter how hard they try to look away they never forget what happend on that christmas day Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
This poem is very sad but think it is possible to happen so be careful Kate |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very well writen, a reminder that no matter what the day or how special it is life is given and life is taken away. If it happens on a holiday, the holiday always reminds those of those they lost on that day. If this is your loss I hope that as time goes by you can heal, and begin to celebrate in some way the lives of those so precious to you, remembering the special times you had with them. That is what I have learned to do. |
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karrymotter New Member
since 2007-12-14
Posts 5 |
this is a great poem the rhymes really help the story be told i really enjoyed this ever so sad topic well done  |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
thank you thats mainly the theme of this poem to appreciate what you have Kate |
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jonasbabii916 New Member
since 2007-12-13
Posts 3 |
Yay you finished it. I thought this one was really good |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
thanks jonasbabii I thought you'd like it!! Kate |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
Amazing job. This poem just reinforces the thought of living each day as if it were your last – because you never know what is going to happen next. |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
nice. kinda sheds some light on the lifes to short theory something thats stupid but works isn't stupid |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you I'm suprised theres so many people who lie what I write, it just encourages me to write more Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
AND TO ALL YOU POETS!! NO THIS DIDN'T REALLY HAPPEN TO ME BUT YOU NEVER KNOW IT COULD HAPPEN TO ANYONE!! Kate |
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