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Dark Poetry #4
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KgIRL
Junior Member
since 2007-11-14
Posts 14
australia

0 posted 2007-12-10 05:38 AM



I wish I could go back to the time that your heart beated for me.
My time with you was awesome,
For once in my life I almost felt free,

But with your new shed of light,
And all our old shadows
Light and
Dampen,
Kill,
And shred our lives

My chest tightens
My throat closes.
Your mouth opens,
But I can’t listen.
I can’t breathe...

You tell me you love me.
My chest loosens.
You tell me you always will.
My heart beats.

But you tell me you won’t wait.
And the tears blur your image.
You tell me you can’t do it
My cheeks burn
You say you can’t keep on with this charade

Charade? Oh god. I’m drowning.

Little bum you there?

Nodding into the phone.
I can’t squeak a sound.

When was my last breath?
Feeling about to burst.
I have to breathe.
Settle.

I have to lie to myself in order to live.
I tell myself I’m his girl and he will be there waiting.
Deep breathes.
No he won’t.
And I burst.

Oh little bum please don’t cry.
I don’t like it when you’re sad

Not knowing what to say.
What did last night mean?
Feeling used and torn.
Hurting beyond comprehension
I hang up the phone.

© Copyright 2007 k.Little - All Rights Reserved
wolfy09
Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93

1 posted 2008-06-11 01:33 PM


wow it is a great write keep writing
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-06-20 08:17 PM


Traumatizing, and very emotive. Poetically sound. All in all, a great write.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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