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Dark Poetry #4

A Reflection

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2007-12-03 08:11 PM

Staring into the mirror,
I saw a reflection of my heart.
Through the cold pane
I saw only a glare.

I saw only a glare
Through the cold pane.
I saw a reflection of my heart,
Staring into the mirror...

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

1 posted 2007-12-03 09:37 PM

This is fabulous! And your 'critiques message' states that your writing can be confusing and hard to desipher.... this one is not confusing... I love how the content and the style complement each other!

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2007-12-05 03:11 AM

Thank you for your kind words. I've been doing a lot of reflecting lately (I apologize for the pun) and I've realized a lot.
As to my 'critiques message', most of my writing in general is hard to understand. It's kind of rare for me to write or say something clearly.

Thanks again!

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

3 posted 2007-12-06 11:20 AM

Assassin. Have you posted this in another forum?

I swear I've read this already.

It is very good, I liked it very much.

hardcorexflirt
Junior Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 12
WI, USA

4 posted 2008-01-12 07:41 PM

wow...you have talent i love this poem keep on writing.

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