Dark Poetry #4 |
A Reflection |
Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Staring into the mirror, I saw a reflection of my heart. Through the cold pane I saw only a glare. I saw only a glare Through the cold pane. I saw a reflection of my heart, Staring into the mirror... We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
This is fabulous! And your 'critiques message' states that your writing can be confusing and hard to desipher.... this one is not confusing... I love how the content and the style complement each other! Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Thank you for your kind words. I've been doing a lot of reflecting lately (I apologize for the pun) and I've realized a lot. As to my 'critiques message', most of my writing in general is hard to understand. It's kind of rare for me to write or say something clearly. Thanks again! We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other. |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Assassin. Have you posted this in another forum? I swear I've read this already. It is very good, I liked it very much. |
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hardcorexflirt Junior Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 12WI, USA |
wow...you have talent i love this poem keep on writing. |
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