Dark Poetry #4 |
The Fibers of Depression |
Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Swimming around in my head Are the fibers of depression Too much to do Too much to handle Too much to anticipate Too much to dwell on Overwheming Thoughts of inadequacy The drowning thoughts Kill my spirit I am swept up by a riptide Of negative thoughts I just want to cover my head Lie down upon a bed Exist only in a closet Of sleep Never caring If I awake again |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Very good. You capture the feelings of depression quite well. I liked it. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
I have felt that, word for word. I love it. Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I really loved it Kate |
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