»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #4
»
Messege On A Bullet
| Dark Poetry #4 |
|
Messege On A Bullet |
|
|
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
|
So that’s who I really am to you Some immature bit$ch If that really is the case you deserve what you get After all you really are a horrible little witch You say I stuck my nose in But I’ve seen you hurt before I just wanted to warn you Before he hurt you more I never knew sex was deadly For me it’d only been fun You lay on your back for hours The night he pulled out a gun I’m sure he didn’t mean to hurt you He just wanted to die As blood splattered upon your face You couldn’t help but ask god why Your questions could never be answered It was only your sins that could be made good But you couldn’t live without him So you did what you thought you should You picked up the silver gun And pointed at your head The angels sang amazing grace When you were pronounced dead I was too late to help you You’d made your decision on your own Your body lay lifeless in the ditch You would now not be alone But lying there beside you was the bullet that took your life And encrypted in a font so fine Read 5 small words “He Shall Be Forever Mine” |
||
| © Copyright 2007 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
This is well written... I love it Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
||
|
Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
love is some times a worst fate then death. for the kiss of hope is all that keeps some alive. good writing powerful words but there seemed to be more anger than pain, but than again that is meerly my take on your craft. Abbeon The world behind these thoughtful eyes, caution may seem crazy. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
