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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2007-11-13 10:50 AM



Another day, but I can't tell

the only thing around me are screams and yells

a darkened room enclosed in walls

it seems not once have I been in the halls

theres a small window that shines little light

but I wouldn't know what goes on, I'm imprisoned, locked tight

it seems I've abannded my friends, they wouldn't know,

not for one day did I ever want to let them go

I can never do anything, go out on my own

and because of that, I'm always alone

I have no freedom, what happend to the red, blue and white

I've always been imprisoned, locked up tight

and it seems so sad, to realize I'm not behind bars,

what keeps me in, is the way people around me are

I hate them, I can't stand them, I really do

and its sad to say this is really true

I fee like a slave, that I can't do anything at all

and it hurts me so bad, that everytime I fall

noone really sees my pain, or sees me fuffer

but I don't want to make it any worse, or any tougher

there hasn't been one day, when I haven't had to wipe tears from my eyes

no matter what I do, or how hard I try

It seems the olderI get the more imprisoned I am

and it hurts me so bad, that noone understands

whats the point of being here anymore?

if my whole life I'm going to be locked behind doors?

I never do anyhting and it doesn't seem right

that I'm here in this world, but i can't live my life

God what have I done to deserve this right?

being all alone, imprisoned locked tight

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 2007-11-13 10:58 AM


Imprisoned is about myself really hating who I live with right now and hoping to one day have a better life

Kate

Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
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2 posted 2007-11-13 06:58 PM


I love it... the flow (something I'm obviously obsessed with) has some rough spots but all in all, very nice.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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3 posted 2007-11-18 12:28 PM


thank you lots!!!
voice2bheard
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4 posted 2009-12-16 05:06 AM


YEA STILL HATE MY DAD'S B*TCH

Kate

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