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Shake
Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 40
0 posted 2007-11-12 11:55 AM

I wrote this poem a very long time ago. I was cleaning out my room and found it, so I decided to post it here. Its one of my favorites out off all that Ive written.

I walk this path of Hell and Sin,
Sights of madness, sights of sorrow,
Sights of Hellish, drunken men,
Their bodies the Devil borrowed...
...And I walk this path so well.

Darknight creatures, bearing fangs,
Angels falling, oh so surprised.
Bodies ache with Hellbent pangs,
No one knows the Devil's disguise...
...And no one knows the truth.

Walking a road of self destruction,
Seeking for exemption,
Seraphs caught in this disruption,
And so I seek redemption...
...And now I know the truth.

Feedback is appreciated!
© Copyright 2007 J. Maree - All Rights Reserved
Mystress May
Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296
Taunton, MA
1 posted 2007-11-12 07:03 PM

Hey doll.... the flow on this one isn't as smooth as that in 'lilith'. I do love how you ended it!

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become
Shake
Junior Member
since 2006-11-17
Posts 40
2 posted 2007-11-17 10:33 AM

Thanks May

Gods and Demons,
Keys, Lyrics, and Vocals
~Shake
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