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Suicidal Angel....
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Suicidal Angel.... |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Suicidal Angel… Its only once you tell yourself, I’ll only bleed for a while But the truth is my dear you can’t keep hiding behind your smile The cuts are getting deeper and you know I know it too You cannot hide the scars now and I don’t know what to do You place the knife against your skin hoping it won’t hurt You dig it in deeper and watch the scar that’s being burnt The blood keeps oozing out as you hold a tissue to the cut You know you did the wrong thing, but you can’t feel it in your gut This is where I find you, wedged against the door I can’t help but cry myself cause I’ve been here before Your big blue eyes are crying cause you can not take the pain We have to find a way to help, the pathway back to sane Please stop crying now it’s over Just rest your head upon my shoulder Watch those deadly dreams float away Let your body move in a rhythmic sway The blood will soon stop oozing and the pain will slowly fade The wound will heal over, now that arrangements have been made The years have come and gone; you’ve got scars to prove it all It’ll be a long winding road, but you’ve got no further left to fall There’s no reason for these lacerations that will forever haunt your past It’s now time to put down the knife and seek help very fast Hell You’re no angel, but you do have an angels face now you’ve lost your innocence, and fallen down from grace |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
My best friend is a cutter.... it's definately not easy to watch someone you love hurting themselves. In the last four lines, it seems like you rushed the second and third ones. Otherwise, I really like it. And find it to hit a very personal note. Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
"There’s no reason for these lacerations that will forever haunt your past" I was a cutter for three years until a few months ago one of my friends finally let me cry into her shoulder for three hours on her birthday. She told me about GOD and now I am so much better off then I have ever been before...This line really explains the way I feel now very well. Every scar I see now haunts me. It's a scary thought, but it's true. NO one can hide from the things they have done to escape their lifes. |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I forgot to mention in the last comment, but I have read a couple of your more recent works and, though I truly enjoy this one, you have possessed a better use of words over time...All your poetry is amazing. |
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angelfacegurl Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 67Swartz Creek, MI |
i can relate so much im addin this to my lib its one of the best poems i have read in a long time and i respect you for speakin of this. thanx britt |
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