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Prudy Junior Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 13the prison inside me |
I am with you again, I can hear and see you, Touch you and hold you, I am finally whole again. Yet something’s wrong, It is too perfect, The sights the smells, This can’t be right. You begin to fade, Darkness envelops you, Hides you and takes you away, I wake up. How cruel dreams are, They give me what I want, Only to have me lose you again. The tears won't fall I feel sad but the tears won't fall. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Prudy.... beautiful! Your feelings are intense... your raw emotion is probably overwhelming for some people. This is beautiful.... Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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Prudy Junior Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 13the prison inside me |
Thank you very much. Really like the comments. I also really like your poems. They really do belong here in the dark poetry forum. One of my favorites of yours is Blackness. Very philosophical and internal if you catch my meaning. I really like the sort of internal dialogue in poems. Like someone speaking inside himself and really discovering what the truth reallly is. In general thank you for all the constructive criticism and for writing good poems. |
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