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Dark Poetry #4

Wanna See The Real Me... Come On I'll Hook You Up!!!

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-11-04 10:44 PM

Take a look at me
Do you like what you see?
Broken dreams and a broken laugh
A dull future, a blood stained past

Skimpy little underwear and a lacy bra
Take a look closer, I aint going very far
Corrupted innocence and a tear stained face
Emotionally blackmailed because I’m mental case

If you like what you see, join the end of the line
It aint very long but I’m sure you’ll be fine
Sit on the bed I wont be long
It’ll be okay when I change the song

Now I awake from the nightmare once more
I was a hooker again hell at least she scores
So I stand up and take another look at me
The mirror cracks again and I don’t like what I see

So I straighten up the halo and screw it in to place
Just another day where I hate looking at my face

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-11-05 01:18 PM

I like it good work!!!

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

2 posted 2007-11-05 01:25 PM

Wow very nice!!

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2007-11-05 07:25 PM

Thanks heaps..

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

4 posted 2007-11-05 09:32 PM

wow.... raw, honest.... beautiful

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2007-11-05 11:34 PM

Thanks Heaps Guys...

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

6 posted 2007-11-06 06:52 AM

This poem had a profound effect on me...thanks for posting it.

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

7 posted 2007-11-07 07:29 AM

almost forgot, I wanted to recommend this book to u RevengelsMine.. http://www.amazon.com/Red-Lion-Elixir-Eternal-Life/dp/0965262189

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