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Dark Poetry #4

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DarK][StorM
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since 2003-12-04

Posts 2

0 posted 2003-12-05 06:43 PM

Waking up and looking outside
Realizing something so beatiful is such a disaster
Trapt inside, not able to leave
Like a cage or bear trap
Seems like days past by...
still no chance, still stuck
the night passes
things go back to normal
....snow.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-12-05 10:46 PM

interesting piece

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-12-06 08:05 PM

Hey Dark,
living where I do
that one word:
SNOW

says it all
*smile*
nice write
xxoo

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

3 posted 2003-12-07 03:26 PM

short to the point and oh so true .....

love this

june x

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-12-08 11:14 AM

I don't get snow where I live but I can understand what the point is. This poem is interesting and intriguing.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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5 posted 2003-12-08 12:57 PM

I can see how you feel that way...I won't live anywhere there is snow

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