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Dark Poetry #4

Mother Part I

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

0 posted 2007-10-25 09:05 PM

Just a month to say goodbye.
Eternity to watch you die.
Is this numbness?Is this pain?
Are these tears that leave a stain?
Will I scar or will I heal?
Damaged goods no longer feel?

You left me there, cold and alone.
You built the wall that made me stone.
You knew the rape was all around.
Rigid silence is all I found.
One last chance to say goodbye.
One last chance to watch you die.

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2007-10-25 11:56 PM

A nice sad dark piece to try and wrap your mind around.

Thank you.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

2 posted 2007-10-26 04:53 PM

Wow!!! Very deep and I must say that I truely loved your poem. I thought it was a very powerful piece.

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

3 posted 2007-10-26 06:41 PM

I was moved wow.

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

4 posted 2007-10-26 06:43 PM

Please read my poem Flames. I’d really appreciate it. ML

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