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Dark Poetry #4

Silence...

DarK][StorM
New Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 2

0 posted 2003-12-04 03:39 PM

Hearts are broken
Love stays strong
keeping the distance from the one and only
knowing both have like feelings for each other
Like walking in the darkness of an empty room
Not finding one another
Words not spoken
Time rushes by...faster and faster
Time expires
Thought of giving up again
Words twisted in a knot in the mouth
Mind boggling desicions
The lights turn on
Silence....

TheGirlNoOneKnew
Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 92
PA, USA

1 posted 2003-12-04 08:18 PM

I really liked this poem alot. I admire your writing style. Good job!

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-12-05 08:31 AM

Very painful to live this. :'( Sending a hug.

Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-12-05 09:04 AM

Very well written

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-12-06 07:37 PM

Dark Storm,
next time speak before the
lights come on
*smile*
mann this left hanging one the edge
xxoo

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*smile*

[This message has been edited by littlewing (12-07-2003 02:22 AM).]

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