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jossal
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since 2007-09-15
Posts 23


0 posted 2007-09-21 03:07 PM



  
Tell me you are an angel,
A golden halo on your head,
Tell me you are a devil,
The toturer of the dead.

I shan't believe you.

Tell me you are ordinary,
As common as can be,
Tell me you are posh,
China cups, to drink tea?

I shan't beleive you.

Tell me you are clever,
A genius in the making,
Tell me you are thick,
Without your hands shaking.

I shan't beleive you.

Tell me you are a fighter,
That you seek to draw blood,
Tell me you are a pacifist,
Wanting peace, for good.

I shan't beleive you.

Tell me you are mental,
As disturbed as can be,
Tell me you are mad,
You're just like me.

Then I will believe you.

Darkness is only the lack of light...

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2007-09-27 02:05 PM


i knew it you're a mormon! me too!
it's the way we speak and write. have you noticed, we're very formal and old english is our very good friend. love your stuff! come check out mine!

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2007-10-11 09:30 AM


i loved this!!! typos though!

but on the whole loved the message!!!! aren't we all disturbed?!!! ;-) lol

It's better to be a lion for a day than a sheep all your life.
-- Sister Elizabeth Kenny

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