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Kitherion
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 181
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0 posted 2007-09-18 12:39 PM



Did you really wish for it?
Are you really out there?
What is it you want from me,
And do I really care?

Or is it you decieved me,
Took my lat wish with salt.
Mayhap you really are there,
But do I really care?

Not only did you hurt me,
Not only did I lie,
You never really cared for me,
You left me here to die.

I wanted nothing else from you,
Just recognition grand,
And yet you still denied me,
The peace that was at hand.

Now I know you wished it,
I know that you are there,
I know exactly what you wanted,
For me to never care.

© Copyright 2007 Donovan - All Rights Reserved
Kitherion
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 181
Johannesburg
1 posted 2007-09-18 12:41 PM


Please excuse the torrid rhyming, I'm don't normally do it, but I had a sudden burst of need.....
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-10-19 09:39 PM


Good job

ARCTIC WIND

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