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Taste My Pain
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Taste My Pain |
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PanFiction Junior Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 11 |
Hello to you all, new here, the place looks fantastic! Taste my pain on the tip of your tongue The wretched bitterness of love gone wrong Suck up the hurt with your ice-cold lips Feel the ripple of dread, beneath your fingertips Hear my cries with you unsympathetic ears Turn your head, disregard the tears The arms which once held me, now push me away The heart that once loved me, another will play Our souls once connected, our love once pure Now exists emptiness only another can cure. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pan~ WELCOME to the wonderful PiP circle of poetic friends~ You write the 'pain' well~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
Welcome, and a fantastic first post. Happy writing. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow great first post so deep i love this Krysti |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Nice job Pan ! looking forward to reading more. Yoin |
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PanFiction Junior Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 11 |
Thank's very much guys.  |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Awesome post, am looking forward to reading more of your work. Welcome!!!!! |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
That is a nice way to express it. pain is just like madicine, we hate it but we take and endure... that is how we know that we are alive... I enjoyed the taste of you pain... it brought me back my sense of life... Tears of Sanity~ |
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