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andrey
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since 2007-04-27
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0 posted 2007-08-22 06:57 PM



I used to have my pride
I was rotting from inside
You came back to haunt again
When I finally thought you died

I wish I'd never lied
It was hard but I denied
You came back to haunt again
When I finally thought you died

Living side by side
Happily with my bride
You came back to haunt again
When I finally thought you died

Where is your damn pride?
In hatred I'll confide
You came back to haunt again
When I finally thought you died

It always rains outside
I hated when you you cried
You came back to haunt again
When I finally thought you died

I'm not angry, what for?
I don't hate you anymore
You should have forgotten me
When I walked out that door

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BrittanyJ
Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-08-24 10:06 AM


"I'm not angry, what for?
I don't hate you anymore
You should have forgotten me
When I walked out that door"

I loved this line!! It was amazing Nicely done.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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