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The Dance |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan 
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The Dance With far to much effort and little music in my life, I struggle to make my staggering look like a dance. Yoin |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Yoin. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
very nicely done. short and sweet. I liked it a lot. Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy it here. Great first post  Krysti ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Very interesting poem, really paints a picture of what it's like to "try and pull it off." Thanks and welcome. |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
Nice one.....effort. "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Awesome brevity...clear |
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sullivanthepoet.com Member
since 2007-06-28
Posts 154Devon, England |
Yoinn... Breathtakingly tight... Bravo! |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you everyone. What a great poetry website this is! Yoin |
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