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carolinabeen
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since 2006-12-12
Posts 69


0 posted 2007-07-31 01:49 AM



if there was so much to be said
why didn't we
if there was so much to be read why didn't YE

I tear, smack down a wall
just because I STILL can

so if there was so much to be said
why

here's a working intelligent without your grace
NOT in my place
man

MAN

if there was so much to talk about
couldn't you

if there was so much to b had
I was there

as I slap and walkabout words
and phrases

asi worry about those
and phases

let them worry


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BrittanyJ
Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-07-31 11:46 AM


I really liked this Nicely done.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2007-08-02 04:52 PM


No worries...

GIS

just to be happy...

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