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carolinabeen
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0 posted 2007-07-27 02:49 AM



how do we not see
it's the thames river you see
my god, or yours
it's STILL the thames river
you see

london floods was a sign
even in roman times

slacksncackbar stuck
can't you see

ok

i'll be calm for those that get it back
to normal
GREAT JOB
can you do it again



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1 posted 2007-07-27 02:56 AM


Blimey, what's happening here? Another great poem in what is usually a forum of morose rubbish.

Well thought out, witty and moreover instructive - not to mention apposite.

Good work.

M

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