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JenniferMaxwell
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0 posted 2007-07-19 10:40 PM


her soft feminine
face framed by an extreme
butch cut gave her a look as conflicted
as my emotions
when it seemed her rough
cotton scrubs took on a different sheen
as her green eyes filled
with compassion acknowledged the grief
reflected in mine

two decades of experience and a world
of preferences apart suddenly joined
by an electric
connection across the forbidden
where attraction’s heart shape
never considers similarities
or differences never demands
more than love freely offered
love freely given

across later wires
in conversations
protracted by elongated pauses and my
drawn out juvenile
hesitation and innocence
sanity returned and her professionalism
disconnecting her desire
with the reluctant prescription
take care


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1 posted 2007-07-26 04:29 PM


Jenn

This seems like a work in the making, but has a lot of potential.

All the best.

M

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