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jayjara
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since 2007-05-02
Posts 90
Florida

0 posted 2007-07-11 11:20 PM



Garden of needles bloom and
stab native vegetation.
Light rays reflect off thin shards
squinting gray eyes
of guilty bystanders
as they collapse,
fertilizing innocent soil.
Keen edges breach the earth
rising to the face of man to
sew chapped lips.
Their muffled voices impair responses
to my questions
as I sprint above the surface
of sharp edges.
No sin to weigh my body down
to a porous sponge.
Floating alone, the needles grow and warp,
upholstering the earth apart,
cross-stitching breathing bodies
into a fantastic quilt.
Nothing strong enough to
cut through roots that strangle the core.
The world seizes it's rotation;
blinding other worlds.  

-J

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-07-12 01:12 AM


wow this had a lot of thought to it I really liked it
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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