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Dark Poetry #4

Frailty

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-07-04 02:25 PM

Frailty

The heart in my chest is bleeding,
But blood never shows a stain.
If only behind this mask of tranquility
You could see a soul that is grieving...
My heart has the same ability
To suffer - to drown in pain.
If you knew how much one word could mean...
If you only saw me falling
Apart right in front of your eyes...
But until the last drop of my blood is shed,
My true love's solemnly sworn not to die.
I guess, I'm like a castle, ruined on the battle's last day,
Or novel with half pages missing...
The other half pages is frayed.

blue face
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

1 posted 2007-07-04 07:20 PM

very true,can diffenantly relate
hope to read more...
sarah

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

2 posted 2007-07-05 10:38 AM

Thanks a lot for reading!

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
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3 posted 2007-07-05 05:53 PM

this is really really amazing loved it
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

4 posted 2007-07-07 12:11 PM

Thanks, hunnie!

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