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Wedding Vowels |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
The distance between us is killing me to be in ur arms would set me free you loved me for who i was and am my love is tangible and i give you every gram of what i never dreamt of giving another i ask myself why it is u even bother to love a lost heartless soul that is me what is it that you in this shell can you see you want to exchange vowels with something torn someone so broken tattered and forelorn you would say till death do us part and when that time comes i will give you the present to show you how much your love to me meant till death do us part... the present is my heart you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I really liked this  It flowed very nicely and had a good rythm to it. Nice write.Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice. |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
wow, this one was really great i love the ending |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
I love it! just like brittany said the poem flows nice write. Sarah |
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