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tearsofpain
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since 2007-05-03
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0 posted 2007-06-14 10:22 PM



My body is so cold I can't feel the bars
I wanna look out but can't find where they are
as I reach the darkness grabs me in
I don't want to go with him
He promised me to give me a tour and after he would show me the door
His arms wrapped around me so tight
Dark as ever I keep  reminding myslf he promised me light
He took me to a place
Which left me with blood on my face
He brought me to a room I looked down and noticed a child in my womb!!!
Belittling words always from his mouth
I just keep promising myself I will get out!!
Nine years later I am still here
Nine years later he still doesnt care

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1 posted 2007-06-16 04:01 PM


This is an awesome write. I can picture this person being "locked up".

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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