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Worst Enemy
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Worst Enemy |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
I saw you in the mirror Looking back at me I wondered who you really were What was it you could see? I smile knowing you would do the same i look away hoping to escape your deathly stare but my attempt to escape you was made in vain i spun around & where ever i looked you were there i sit down breathing deeply thinking what to do i look up and i see you sitting down mocking me i stand up slowly thinking, thinking it all through all i want is for you to leave and me to be free i walk away you follow me always there next to me i look ahead and see grass and not another mirror i run towards it and smile as i escape my worst enemy i look back at the nothingness and in my dream i shiver Taking a drag and watching the world through tired eyes |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
Wow I know how you feel reflections are always following me. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
your poems are always so deep, i liked this one  Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice. |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
just abit of info on this poem... it was submitted to poetry.com and was a semi finalist for poem of the year 2007, unfortunately it was held in america and i had to pay for my ticket and fares etc which in my present financial situation was impossible so unfortunately it had to be withdrawn you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I love your poem very unique. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Congrats on winning!! |
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